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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

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Students
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' evaluation was always a subject of debates. According to some experts, conventional
exams
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 are the best tools to assess
school
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performance
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, while others think that continuous year-round evaluation in form of assignments and
projects
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 is of greater importance. In my opinion, the combination of both should be considered the best method.
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 of all, it happens sometimes that
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 are sick or not having enough sleep before their formal
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, or they might have a high level of anxiety during the exam, making them not be able to do well.
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 can affect their evaluation.
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 they might be doing everything right, they might end up even failing the course.
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, it
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 happens that some
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 do not attend
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 regularly, and have not done the required assignments and
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, but study hard and pass the final
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. Which in
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 case it is not fair to others who regularly attend
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 and did all the
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 on time.
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, a traditional assessment might fail as the only tool to evaluate
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performance
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 for the reasons above. It seems to me that in order to have a fair assessment of a student's
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, we should consider all components together.
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, be able to evaluate them throughout the
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 through their
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, assignments and attendance. By doing that, it would be fair to
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 who attended
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 regularly but didn't do a good job on their final
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 to be given a chance of using their overall grades.
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,
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 will encourage those who are only looking at final
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 and not doing their
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 to reconsider taking their works during
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 more seriously if they want higher marks. Overall, final
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 that were always considered as the primary mean of assessing
students
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 can not be the best way to evaluate one's
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, I believe the combination of
school
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performance
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 and final
exams
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 can be the most appropriate approach.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • controlled environment
  • academic ability
  • creativity
  • critical thinking
  • practical skills
  • holistic approach
  • high-stakes exam
  • rote learning
  • deeper understanding
  • plagiarism
  • standardized measure
  • consistency
  • fairness
  • track progress
  • feedback
  • equitable approach
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