Many people think that the behavior of professional sportsmen off the field is not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

There has been an on-going debate about the responsibilities of celebrities, especially

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to well-behaved in their personal

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. While many people argue that the only criteria of

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are their

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in sport fields, some believe that their daily behaviours are

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influential to the public. From my perspective, it is necessary to take the personal issues of sportsmen into consideration. Without doubts, the determining factor that makes an atheles famous is his or her

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ability. If society pays too much attention to their private

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rather than their

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, they will have to pay extra efforts in maintaining their images,

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of practising what really important for their

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career.

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, the privacy of these professional

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needs sufficient protection. Nowadays, the privacy of those living under the focus of media is prone to be harmed, for almost all their personal actions are under surveillance.

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, not only does an athlete need excellent

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, but

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they ought to behave well in their personal

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.

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is because any inappropriate actions or scandals

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could lead to a huge negative impact on society. The prosperity of a range of

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globally

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to an overwhelming concern on the personal

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of the sportsmen. Take many well-known basketball players in the NBA as examples, it is not surprising to see their marriages and scandals becoming the most heatedly-discussed topics in the newspapers. As the consequence of

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great influence, any of their unjust actions may become bad examples for the public. To put everything into consideration, some agree with the opinion above since the most significant quality of an athlete is his or her professional

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and their privacy should be well-protected.

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, I support the opposite view since their

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behaviours are too impactful to the public.