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Study needs time, peace and comfort, whereas employment needs the same thing. Someone says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today?

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Space of comfort,
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the ambiance
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ambiance
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 of peace and having enough
time
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 to study is important,
however
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, working at the same
time
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 need the same thing. Others,
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 it impossible, because you cannot do
both
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 at the same. Nowadays, people are working while having their
studies
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. I believe, that it is possible in
today
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's generation. Every young adult's wanted to have extra income to sustain their
studies
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 and for personal experience.
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, being a student needs
time
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 to study for their exams but
also
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 they need to have a
job
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 for their own needs.
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, students who don't have enough money to sustain their life while studying, they need to work. Having
both
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 is not easy but it needed for their own benefits. Many successful individuals
today
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 combine
the
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academic
studies
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 and work
like
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 doctors and engineers.
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, it is possible to do
both
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 in our
life
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today
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.
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, most
of
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companies
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the companies
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 offer a small amount of
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those student
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 who wants
have
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part-
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the part-time
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time
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job
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.
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, in Europe, students
are being encourage
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 to have work while studying, since they live
in
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 their own and to gain personal experience. They tend to get a
job
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 for them to buy what they want and do not depend on their parents. Most of these are being true in
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a western
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 and eastern country, being independent to look for their
job
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 and studying at the same
time
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 to gain experience in life.
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, it is real in
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today's
todays
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 generation. In conclusion, though we need
time
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, peace, comfort in our career and in
studies
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, it is proven by many successful
person
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people
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 that you can combine
both
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 at the same
time
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 especially
today
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.
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