Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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technology
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people
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way
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one of
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is, the way
people
communicate with each other, as now youths
are mostly spend
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their time on
internet
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and social site ,which has made
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social life non. In my view the
technology
which we have today have a negative effect on the
people
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manner,
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it is
people
interaction or making
people
lazy.  The developed countries are more advance in all short of thing
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it is science or
technology
. In the field of
technology
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most of the developed and developing countries are
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on computer and other
machinery
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things.
People
are mostly prefer
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computer
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a computer
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over social interaction which has made
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social life more difficult.
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social
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a social
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site like
facebook
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and insta, nowadays
people
prefer to talk on
this
site rather
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in person
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interaction,
this
has made more
incompantancy
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incompetency
in the person. Overall in conclusion
technology
has negative effects on
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people
social life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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