Many jobs that used to be done by humans are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

More often
machines
replace
humans
to do their
jobs
. There is no consensus in society is it
positive
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a positive
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or negative
development
. Some of them say that robots are better
then
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people
,
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because they are doing work faster and without mistakes. But,
on the contrary
,
it
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its
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extent
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extends
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to unemployment. So, in my
opinion
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it is a bad trend. So I will try to prove
you
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that with examples of The
Goverment
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Government
of Ukraine report and professor Jan Danilov's research. The
first
reason why
this
development
bring
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more disadvantages
,
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is that many workers are losing their
jobs
because they are replaced by
machines
.
For example
,
report
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the report
a report
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of
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Ukrainian
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the Ukrainian
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Goverment
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Government
said that more and more
jobs
that used to be done by
humans
are now being done by
machines
.
For instance
, for the
last
5
years
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the number of workers had decreased by 13
percent
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per cent
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. So
this
is the
first
reason why
i
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I
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think it is a bad trend. The
second
example
why
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this
is negative
development
proved by professor Jan Danilov. In his
research
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he studied how people and
machines
doing the same job and he came to conclusions that pay workers are cheaper
then
buy
machines
for it. So
this
is another reason why replacing
humans
by
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technological devices is a bad tendency. In
conclusion
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I think it is a negative
development
when many
jobs
that used to be done by
humans
are now being done by
machines
. In my
opinion
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it is a negative trend and society should choose people
instead
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ofinstead
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robots.
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