Many jobs that used to be done by humans are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
More often
machines
replace humans
to do their jobs
. There is no consensus in society is it positive
or negative Add an article
a positive
development
. Some of them say that robots are better then
peopleReplace the word
than
,
because they are doing work faster and without mistakes. But, Remove the comma
apply
on the contrary
, it
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its
extent
to unemployment. So, in my Replace the word
extends
opinion
it is a bad trend. So I will try to prove Add a comma
,opinion
you
that with examples of The Change preposition
to you
Goverment
of Ukraine report and professor Jan Danilov's research.
The Correct your spelling
Government
first
reason why this
development
bring
more disadvantagesChange the verb form
brings
,
is that many workers are losing their Remove the comma
apply
jobs
because they are replaced by machines
. For example
, report
Add an article
the report
a report
of
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from
Ukrainian
Correct article usage
the Ukrainian
Goverment
said that more and more Correct your spelling
Government
jobs
that used to be done by humans
are now being done by machines
. For instance
, for the last
5 years
the number of workers had decreased by 13 Add a comma
,years
percent
. So Change the spelling
per cent
this
is the first
reason why i
think it is a bad trend.
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I
second
example why
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of why
this
is negative development
proved by professor Jan Danilov. In his research
he studied how people and Add a comma
,research
machines
doing the same job and he came to conclusions that pay workers are cheaper then
buy machines
for it. So this
is another reason why replacing humans
by
technological devices is a bad tendency.
In Change preposition
with
conclusion
I think it is a negative Add a comma
,conclusion
development
when many jobs
that used to be done by humans
are now being done by machines
. In my opinion
it is a negative trend and society should choose people Add a comma
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