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An overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Thank him for the invitation and accept the invitation  Write details about your visit  Briefly describe what you want to do there.

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Dear Bellingham I am very happy to read your suggestion and I hope I will not let it down. I am writing to express to thank you for inviting me to visit your country. Thank you very much for your appreciation and kind attitude. I will try to get to you as soon as possible because it has been years since I saw you and I miss talking about the things we spent together in our youth. Just today I am going to buy a ticket. I will bring you some sweet cakes from my country that you like, and in two days I will reach your city. I want to have a good time with you. It was one of my dreams to take a picture with you at the Eiffel Tower in your city,
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 dream because of you. Thank you for your courtesy again. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Mardonbek

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to enhance readability. While your letter includes distinct ideas, they can be better organized within each paragraph.
coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure of your letter, connect your ideas and paragraphs using a variety of cohesive devices and transition words.
task achievement
The response is good, but ensure a complete answer to the prompt by expanding on the details of your visit, such as your arrival time, the length of your stay, and any specific plans you have.
task achievement
Maintain a suitable tone throughout the letter by consistently using formal or informal language that matches the relationship with the recipient. There's a mix of formal and informal tones here, so clarity on the nature of your relationship could help in choosing the right tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • excitement
  • itinerary
  • arrival
  • accommodation
  • transportation
  • local customs
  • landmarks
  • culinary delights
  • get-together
  • pack essentials
  • cultural norms
  • sightseeing
  • reunion
  • recommendations
  • invaluable experience
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