Limited money should be spend on computer equipment or good teachers. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
In
this
modern era
everything in the Add a comma
,era
world
depend
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depends
to
technology,if the Verify preposition usage
on
computer
technologies get outdated from the human then
it will be a total loss of the
human efforts.In my Remove the article
apply
opinion
there should be a good Add a comma
,opinion
computer
device as well as an excellent teacher
is equally important for the milestones of human
being.Add an article
a human
the human
This
essay will discuss the advantages of the fully equiped
Correct your spelling
equipped
computer
system or a
efficient Change the article
an
teacher
on the one hand,the world
is getting faster with technologies.there are many inventions has
been launched in the Add a pronoun
that has
world
something can replace the human being.the neew
studies Correct your spelling
new
shows
that by the year of 2050 most of the work doing by Change the verb form
show
human
being will be replaced by computers.Add an article
a human
For
instance
in Add a comma
,instance
United
Add an article
the United
states
of Change the capitalization
States
America
most Add a comma
,America
of
Change preposition
apply
the
lawyers are not holding the job because there is Correct article usage
apply
particular
application is available in Add an article
a particular
the
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apply
smart phones
that can easily accessible for normal Correct your spelling
smartphones
people
.It will help the people
to get the
justice directly from the court.Not only Correct article usage
apply
this
but also
after few years the doctors will Replace the word
lose
loose
their job because there is an application is currently available named WATSON,Correct your spelling
lose
this
application can diagnose the disease of the patient and it can be prescribe
the medications according to the condition of the patient.Due to all of these Change the verb form
prescribe
defintely
Correct your spelling
definitely
people
should update their knowledge
both technically and wisely otherwise
people
get outdated who did not run according to new
era.
Add an article
a new
the new
on the other hand
,there should be a good teacher
also
will help a lot to improve the knowledge
of people
,in older days excellent teachers were there to teach the students
especially in maths and science moreover
to improve the personality traits.In past days the technology was not established as present day
,during that Add a hyphen
present-day
periode
only the teachers Correct your spelling
period
was
the source of Change the verb form
were
knowledge
.They have done many
hard Replace the quantifier
much
work
to gain the Change to a plural noun
works
knowledge
and they conveyed to
the Correct pronoun usage
it to
students
.Those students
become the best people
in the
society.The computers can never teach the best attitudes and Correct article usage
apply
charachter
to the Correct your spelling
character
students
however
the mentors could do that.A teacher
has an important role in developmental
stages of each child.According to Sanskrit Correct article usage
the developmental
myth
it has been written as MATHA PITHA GURU DAIVAM which means respect your mother,father,Add a comma
,myth
teacher
and the almighty.
To conclude,although
teaching is a
divine employment,Remove the article
apply
computer
and technology is inevitable for the modern world
.Because a person cannot be successful without computer
knowledge
in his both curriculum and future carrier.The whole world
is getting updated day by day.We all have to run behind the
modernisation or else we would get outdated from the earth.So be careful to Correct article usage
apply
be modify
yourselfChange the verb form
modify
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