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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.

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During the
last
 decades,
gender
 equality has rapidly improved, and nowadays, it is controversial whether universities ought to accept an equal number of
men
 and women. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
 statement because the assumption appears for me not to take account of the genuine meaning of
gender
 equality.
To begin
 with, rejecting prominent applicants due to their
gender
 would be a hindrance for both universities and students. Naturally, the students’ sex balance is one-sided since
men
 and women have distinct tendency due to the difference
of
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 body function and hormones.
For example
, boys tend to be fascinated by vehicle,
thus
men
 are more likely interested in Physics.
Therefore
, it might cause a lack of opportunity for talented students, and it is
also
 unprofitable for society.
Furthermore
, it might discourage youngsters from aiming to enter a specific department if they thought it would be more challenging because of their
gender
. Above all, it might deepen sexism to judge people by sex
instead
 of their own ability. If adults talk about sexism when considering higher education, it impresses youngsters as if the world is divided between
men
 and women. In
the
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society becoming more LGBT friendly, we should not categorize people into only he and
she
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. In conclusion, I modestly deny
this
 idea because it might enhance sexism. Any educational facilities ought to provide opportunities for everyone regardless of their
gender
, race, and creed. I believe
that is
 a hopeful way to ease not only
gender
 discrimination but
also
 the equality of humankind.
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