Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalisation significantly contributes to the development of the game industry as

people

of different age and nationality find

computer

games

interesting.

However

, some

people

believe that

games

have little educational value and parents considerate

games

giving harmful consequences to their

children

. I utterly agree with

this

opinion and

this

essay will discuss the negative impact of

games

on

children

, followed by an appropriate conclusion. On the one hand,

games

are invented with the aim of entertaining so it is hard to find educational value in playing

games

. Nowadays, there are a variety of

games

for all ages, especially the advancement of aggressive

games

,

such

as

:

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Free fire, Pubg, LOL,...

Although

these

games

supply a large amount of money for professional gamers and streamers they are not suitable for

children

exceptionally primary and secondary students.

Moreover

,the percentage of

children

who have access to

this

game increasing rapidly day by day, they can not acquire appropriate knowledge at their age while they easily get angry with friends, families and tend to solve the problem by violence.

On the other hand

, some

children

become addicted to

games

which lead to a dangerous impact on their mental and physical health. Playing

computer

games

regularly intensively affect their health. An illustration of

this

is that

children

spend nearly 3 or 4 hours sitting in front of the screen which is harmful to their eye and even some bone problems. A recent survey that nearly 70% of 10-year-old wear glasses, an outstanding number compared to the

last

century.

Also

,

computer

games

reduce

children

's time for social activities and even relationships. For instances, they spend little time playing outdoor activities or doing exercise as they instantly use the

computer

after studying at school. What is more, conversation and opportunities for forming a new relationship between

children

are substantially affected

.

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As they only concentrate on the game's rank and neglect all

people

around which influences their mental healths and usual behaviours. In conclusion, using

computer

games

for entertaining purpose is

also

great but imposing on them would make terrible impacts on

people

, especially

children

. Parents should limit

children

time in

games

or find some

games

containing

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educational value. From my perspective, it is great to use

games

in the right way to balance your life .