People should only buy locally grown food ; it is better for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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It is of great worth to discuss whether or not it is more benefits for
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and
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to purchase locally grown
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. The answer to
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and foremost, it will definitely play a pivotal role in decreasing the national economy. In
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contemporary society,
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live with having diverse
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from all over the world. If there is some regulation related to
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purchasing
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, it discourages
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from eating a variety of dishes.
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, if there is
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area
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only vegetables can be obtained,
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who live in that area do not have a
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to eat
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different food
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.
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make reduce their
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habits.
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, it will have a negative impact on making society poorly.
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is mainly because by interacting with other area's
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,
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get to know numerous cuisines, which used a variety of ingredients.
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, to discourage
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from having
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other
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can lead to serious problems, which is trafficking or inflation of a certain
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, if
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should not allow
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to take in other
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without
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sufficeint
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sufficient
consideration, it can lead to
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destabilize
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both the economy and individual. To summarize what I have mentioned above, I am for the notion that
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should encourage
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to have
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about new
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that come from other cities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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