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In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspaper because they will be able to read whatever they want online without paying. TO what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Buying books or newspaper will going to outdated as whatever you want you can get online for free in coming
future
.
This
 have both advantages and disadvantages like reading from online will increase your screen
time
 which will cause many diseases like eye problems, etc. And reading from
book
 is a very different experience as you can see the hand written word of the written. In my view I agree with
this
 that in coming
future
 you can get whatever you want to read for free online.
This
 will make the life easy,will save your
time
 and you can get anything anywhere at anytime. World is getting advance in every field like: In technology, science, health service, etc. As we are evolving day by day people are now more depend on computer for there daily uses
for example
: if they have to buy anything can purchase online, if have to search anything regarding there projects can browse online, weather need to read and they are looking for particular
book
 can find online and read. Comparing to past where pupils have to wait for days to get whatever they wanted like if someone want a
book
 for that
book
 to deliver it take atleast a week
time
 which is a waste to
time
 and money both. In my view i agree with
this
 that in
future
 we can get whatever we want for free,
however
 the world is getting too advance in IT sector like innovation of computer, mobile, laptop, etc which have make the life more convenient and easy for everyone because you can have anything,anywhere with no mean of
time
. Anyone want to read a
book
 or newspaper can do for free with just on one click on the screen and can get whatever they are looking for. Overall in conclusion life will be much easier
then
 before in coming
future
 because of the development of IT sector throughout the world. Which have make the living convenient and without doing and physical effects. You can get excess to books or newspaper online for free anytime.
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