Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-years-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals.To what extend do you think crime is determined by human nature?Is it possible to stop children from going up to be criminals?

Some researchers hold a belief that an infant's behaviour could be judged
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he will have a violent fortune or not.
Although
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inherited traits play an important role in an
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life, I believe that the
future
cannot be predicted as it is uncertain;
however
, other factors
such
as upbringing and quality of education provided to child matters.
Also
, in my opinion, young children can be encouraged to avoid criminal activities which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with suitable illustrations. To commence with, the innate characteristics
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parents to their offspring
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a substantial role in the
future
. Behaviour,
for example
, children sometimes remain quiet or behave rudely
due to
the nature of their
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parent
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.
Thus
, they observe the actions of the members of the family and act
accordingly
or imbibe them in every situation from where they can be recognized easily.
However
, there are several facts that nurture could be better than nature.
In other words
, a small child is considered
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clay and he can be moulded in any environment even
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nature by birth. For
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instance, if the student gets a positive atmosphere with ample attention and facilities, he will definitely get desirable scores;
hence
, the youngsters with remarkable upbringing will reap fruitful outcomes in their
future
.
Moreover
, if teenagers move towards the wrong path, they should not be scolded but the consequences of their behaviour should be taught to them as they could bring up the negative fortune unintentionally.
To conclude
, despite the fact that inculcated habits since birth could influence the adulthood of the child, I think the environment and
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education
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an imperative role in the
future
and the children could be easily mounted with the energy they deserve;
however
, they need proper guidance to amend anything in them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crime
  • criminal behavior
  • human nature
  • environmental factors
  • interventions
  • prevent
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