You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter • thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience • explain what you hope to learn from the work experience • ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is John Western, and I am a new staff who will take three months off to do work
experience
in your organization next month. I am writing to ask about some of my work
experience
and further
information about my work
.
Firstly
, thank you for having me to work
in this
organization. I greatly appreciate your acceptance and willingness. Secondly
, could you please provide me with more information about the work
experience
? As I am an expert in the administrative field, I hope I can gain practical experience
specifically to display my ability in this
field. If so, I would greatly appreciate your understanding and assistance in considering this
request. Lastly
, should I bring my relative certificates and other documents with me on the first day? Is there a dress code regulation I should be aware of? These questions can help me to be well-prepared so that I will quickly fit into my job.
Once again, thank you for giving me this
opportunity.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
John WesternSubmitted by aa0963178783 on
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task achievement
You asked relevant questions and expressed your gratitude well. However, there is some repetition in expressing your gratitude which can be streamlined for brevity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your paragraphs each focus on a single idea; you combined asking for information and expressing thanks in one paragraph. Separating these would help readability.
task achievement
Your writing tone is polite and professional, suitable for a letter to a manager.
coherence cohesion
The letter is logically structured with a clear opening, body, and closing.
coherence cohesion
You maintain good coherence and flow throughout the letter.