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In the modern age, some people think it is unnecessary to teach children the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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At present, many people argue that the
skill
 of handwriting is useful or not.
This
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this
 argument and
then
 issue my opinion. On the one hand, I think it is indubitable that some people think
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calligraphy is not necessary to teach in the school as it is unpractical for
students
. When
students
 enter
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society in the future, they should be equipped with the practical skills and knowledge to deal with many problems in
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life and work. Obviously, the
skill
 of handwriting has become an old school technique, which has been replaced by
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cutting-edge technology
such
 as the SIRI on the iPhone, Typing on the keyboard.
In contrast
 with the speaking and the typing of a computer input method, the handwriting cannot show a superiority of the productivity in the office working and
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convenience of daily routine life.
On the other hand
, the
skill
 of handwriting is
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 training method for children to promote their concentration
skill
. Student
need
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 to possess the ability to focus on learning as well as withstand a variety of disturbing sources and temptations.
This
 means that handwriting
skill
 can help
students
 develop their potential
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 brains and enhance their patience. Eventually, the handwriting
skill
 will indirectly help
students
 access
to
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society and collect success in the future. In conclusion, in the modern age,
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calligraphy is not a longer useful
skill
 in real life, but
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handwriting training has a positive impact on the
students
. I hope that schools remain
this
 traditional training method.
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