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All fathers should be entitled to time-off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?

#fathers #time-off #work #children
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Some companies give extra vacations to
mans
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men
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 when they become
fathers
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. From my point of view, it is a positive trend. I guess
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fathers
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 should bring up their
children
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 as well as mothers do.
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 initiative will help women to stay mentally healthy.
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, newborns will take
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fathers’
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their fathers’
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 attention, which is necessary at
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 age.
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, women face a lot of difficulties, when become mothers. They have to have sleepless nights, their organisms are very weak, and they have no
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 for rest.
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, the
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motherhood
is almost always consists
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 of endless screaming of a baby and a very large number of things to learn for the
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time
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.
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, they could become very nervous and depressed. Thereby, it is essential for their husbands to take some days off
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work and help with
baby
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the baby
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, kids need both parents’ attention, not only
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their mother’s
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.
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, there have been situations, when infants did not recognize their
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 because they spent less
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 with them.
Fathers
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 can give newborns
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 of protection and safety. It is critical for people to understand it, and spend as much
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 with
children
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 as it is possible. To sum up, employers should let
mans
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men
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 to take holidays
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 when their
children
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 are born. In my humble opinion, it has a lot of pros and no cons. I believe
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 society will support my views and families will grow their
children
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 together. It will be very useful for
children
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 and parents as well.
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