You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

#course #country #accommodation #provider

Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter requesting you to make

necessary

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the necessary

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arrangement

Fix the agreement mistake

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for our 3-night stay at your resort which is from 23rd March till 26th March. I would like to make a reservation for a duplex room on the high floor facing the beachside, as we are a family of three I believe it will be more feasible.

Furthermore

, could you confirm if the price is inclusive of breakfast throughout our stay in your hotel?

Also

, I would be glad if you can provide more details on it. As we are there on a vacation, will you be able to arrange for a day-tour which covers most places of interest? Is there any event conducted like a campfire, shows and games for kids at your inn? If so, I appreciate it if you could inform us of the timing in advance along with the type of activity so that we can prepare our travel

accordingly

Lastly

, are there any tourist spots nearer to the resort for which we can opt for in-house transportation? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Anna

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