Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Extremely long commute
time
is one of the most annoying problems employees have nowadays. To tackle
this
problem, a part of
people
suggests that it can shorten the
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time
from homes to offices if the public areas are replaced by apartments for commuters, while others argue that public areas are vital to residents which cannot be removed. From my point of view, I disagree with
this
suggestion. In
this
essay, I will discuss both opinions and explain my personal view. It is undeniable that building more apartments in
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for employees can dramatically save their
time
on the road during peak hours.
This
allows
people
to have extra spare
time
staying with their families or socializing with friends after work.
For instance
, the average commuter
time
in Beijing where is the capital of China has been more than two hours per day in
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decade. So it seems
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to have extra two hours every day to spend on personal interests.
On the other hand
, there are other aspects
people
should consider
besides
the convenience of going to work when developing a city. In my view, since
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urbanization has transferred the cities into concrete jungles, public areas especially green places are particularly essential in residents’ daily life. To be more precise, the parks and gardens not only beautify the surroundings and make the environment more lively and energetic, but
also
provide
people
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area to attend outdoor activities to maintain health, especially for elderly
people
and children. Those public places bring
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quality of
living
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environment which is priceless.
Moreover
, I believe there are other methods to solve the issues,
such
as upgrading
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public transportation and infrastructures. In conclusion, even though building more houses in city
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is a way to save commuters’
time
, the governments should consider more about residents’ living environment and choose other methods to shorten the
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time
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuters
  • urban areas
  • housing availability
  • alleviating housing crises
  • public transport
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental health
  • biodiversity
  • recreational
  • mental health benefits
  • urban heat islands
  • green lungs
  • community interaction
  • cohesion
  • innovative urban planning
  • multi-use buildings
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