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You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back

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Dear Guru, Hope you are doing well today. It was very enjoyable spending a weekend at your house. I am writing
this
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 letter to tell you that when I was at your house, I left my
coat
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 which contains some important things. I was in
rush
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a rush
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 to come back because of my commitments for the upcoming week. Because of the rush, I left my
coat
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 there. It is a black leather
coat
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 with pockets on both sides. It has buttons that are in the shape of
lion
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a lion
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. I vividly remember that before leaving the house, I was sitting in the living area on your white colour couch and I left it there. The
coat
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 is not important
for
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to
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 me.
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, the stuff in the pocket is more significant. There is my driving license, health card, credit card in the left pocket and and on the other side, I have my supplements for migraine
problem
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problems
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 which I have to take daily. I would appreciate
if
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it if
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 you could send it through Canada Post or your son could
handover
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hand it over
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 to me. I apologize for
this
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. I know about your busy schedule but could it be possible for you to help me regarding
this
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? Take care and thank you in advance. I will be waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Hk

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task achievement
Consider adding more detail about the occasion and your enjoyment during your stay. This would enhance the overall warmth of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea more clearly to improve clarity and flow. For instance, discussing the coat's appearance and its contents separately would be beneficial.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to correct small grammatical errors, such as 'I was in rush' to 'I was in a rush.' This will make your writing more polished.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a friendly and polite tone, appropriate for a letter to a friend.
complete response
You clearly expressed the urgency and importance of the items left in your coat, which helps convey your message effectively.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciation
  • accidentally
  • distinctive features
  • fabric
  • inner/outer pockets
  • courier service
  • parcels
  • reimburse
  • inconvenience
  • affectionately
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