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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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curfew
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 is a common precaution put in place by governments nationwide to avoid firing up the intensity of any nationwide disturbance. Many times, these curfews have a guideline that
teenagers
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 are only allowed to be out of doors after
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 time at
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 when
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accompanied
 by a parent or a guardian. I believe that
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 guideline is very crucial for
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the health
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 of young children and their safety.
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, an imposed
curfew
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 sends an alert that the social situation in the imposed community is very delicate and it would be dangerous to be walking around at
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, especially after the restricted hours.
Teenagers
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, particularly, are vulnerable to safety when unguided by adults during
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 situations.
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 that raged the internet a
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 months ago about a lone kid being shot by a mob sometime after twilight can be a perfect example for understanding how unsafe a teenager can be when left by themselves in these danger-prone areas.
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, it is important that these kids stay indoors unless
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accompanied
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 hours. On the other side, curfews can be laid by governments for curbing the
deteriotation
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deterioration
 of young kids health. There are rising cases of drug usage in
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 population in recent times in
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, particularly
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 to
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 in
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 partying culture. It is important to sustain these type of scenarios by imposing curfews in and around areas which are popular for
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night
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partying
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. Only by taking these strict actions, we can help in keeping
teenagers
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' health in place and help them grow to be responsible citizens. In conclusion, I believe and support the idea that
teenagers
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 should be allowed to step out of their homes if and only if an adult is alongside them during
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 nights after restricted hours. These restrictions will ultimately be beneficial for them, keeping them safe and healthy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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