increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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held opinion that the ultimate solution to decrease growing

traffic

and

pollution

obstacles is rising the cost of

petrol

. I totally agree with

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of reasons.

To begin

with, there is a couple of reasons to solve those issues. Individual

use

is increasing nowadays because of

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cost of fossil fuels. Carbon dioxide is emitted from the burning of fuel oil;

therefore

,

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price

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of

petrol

could solve

traffic

problems. Not only it solves the

traffic

issues, but

also

it provides to reduce

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environmental

pollution

. At the same time, Industries which produce the products by using

petrol

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the number of them due to higher costs.

Thus

,

people

might choose green energy.

As a result

, increasing the price of

petrol

is one of the solutions to tackle the problems of

traffic

and

pollution

.

On the other hand

, there is an array of measures to prevent those dilemmas. The prime one is that public transports

use

could be increased by

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. Put simply, governments could encourage their citizens to

use

mass transports more. The more

people

use

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public transports, the more the

traffic

and

pollution

reduce remarkably. Another one is that

people

can cycle when they go to

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.

That is

, governments might improve the cycle road. Had

people

gone to

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by bike, the

traffic

and

pollution

would have been reduced. Take the place where the

people

go to their business by bike as an example;

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countries have

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less

traffic

and

pollution

obstacles. In conclusion,

although

increasing the cost of

petrol

can avoid

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traffic

and

pollution

problems, I do believe that there are some solutions to prevent those.