In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes which have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
The modern generation family model has restructured, and the
responsibilities
of the family members have Use synonyms
also
impacted. In my opinion, these changes have a negative impact because, most Linking Words
families
are isolated into smaller groups which disturbed the Use synonyms
balance
in Use synonyms
life
and health of the people, and Use synonyms
both
Use synonyms
wife
and Use synonyms
husband
are preferring to work and the Use synonyms
children
in the family are ignored.
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Firstly
, in the previous year's majority of the Linking Words
families
were joint Use synonyms
families
living together in a big house. The men in the family were usually taken Use synonyms
care
of the financial Use synonyms
responsibilities
, women used to take Use synonyms
care
of the family and the elders took the responsibility of the Use synonyms
children
. Use synonyms
For example
, when I was a kid, my father was running a business to earn money required for our family, my mother used to take Linking Words
care
of the house-hold work, and my grandparents were used to teach us good things and their experiences of Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
This
helped to Linking Words
balance
the stress in the family as well as we are emotionally connected and take Use synonyms
care
of each other. But nowadays the isolated family lacks Use synonyms
this
advantage.
Linking Words
Secondly
, in most smaller isolated Linking Words
families
, Use synonyms
both
Use synonyms
wife
and Use synonyms
husband
are working hard to earn, as many of them usually believe that money is the main factor to maintain high social status and costly lifestyle. While the couple is working, the Use synonyms
children
have no support from elders to take Use synonyms
care
of them and they are left in the hostel or daycare Use synonyms
care
. Use synonyms
This
is has a negative impact on the family and society as well because, the family losses connect between them and Linking Words
children
may opt for a wrong path in their carrier as they have no one to guide them. Use synonyms
For example
, I know a family in which Linking Words
both
the Use synonyms
wife
and Use synonyms
husband
used to work in a private company and their 6-year-old son was placed in a hostel. Use synonyms
Both
Use synonyms
wife
and Use synonyms
husband
separated after a few years as there were many misunderstandings between them in managing the family, and the main reason for Use synonyms
this
is stress and improper work-Linking Words
life
Use synonyms
balance
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, now the Linking Words
life
of the child is Use synonyms
also
spoiled due to their parent's separation. Overall, Linking Words
this
shows that changes in family Linking Words
responsibilities
cause damage to humans in the social community.
In conclusion, in recent years, Use synonyms
both
the family structure and the roles that family members used to play have changed. I believe that these changes have a negative impact. The old fashioned combined family with shared roles and Use synonyms
responsibilities
had a better Use synonyms
balance
in Use synonyms
life
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite