In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes which have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
The modern generation family model has restructured, and the
responsibilities
of the family members have also
impacted. In my opinion, these changes have a negative impact because, most families
are isolated into smaller groups which disturbed the balance
in life
and health of the people, and both
wife
and husband
are preferring to work and the children
in the family are ignored.
Firstly
, in the previous year's majority of the families
were joint families
living together in a big house. The men in the family were usually taken care
of the financial responsibilities
, women used to take care
of the family and the elders took the responsibility of the children
. For example
, when I was a kid, my father was running a business to earn money required for our family, my mother used to take care
of the house-hold work, and my grandparents were used to teach us good things and their experiences of life
. This
helped to balance
the stress in the family as well as we are emotionally connected and take care
of each other. But nowadays the isolated family lacks this
advantage.
Secondly
, in most smaller isolated families
, both
wife
and husband
are working hard to earn, as many of them usually believe that money is the main factor to maintain high social status and costly lifestyle. While the couple is working, the children
have no support from elders to take care
of them and they are left in the hostel or daycare care
. This
is has a negative impact on the family and society as well because, the family losses connect between them and children
may opt for a wrong path in their carrier as they have no one to guide them. For example
, I know a family in which both
the wife
and husband
used to work in a private company and their 6-year-old son was placed in a hostel. Both
wife
and husband
separated after a few years as there were many misunderstandings between them in managing the family, and the main reason for this
is stress and improper work-life
balance
. Moreover
, now the life
of the child is also
spoiled due to their parent's separation. Overall, this
shows that changes in family responsibilities
cause damage to humans in the social community.
In conclusion, in recent years, both
the family structure and the roles that family members used to play have changed. I believe that these changes have a negative impact. The old fashioned combined family with shared roles and responsibilities
had a better balance
in life
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