You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe - competition snd prize - About the photograph - Invite your friend

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Dear Anmol, How's it going? It's great to write to you after
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a long time. You'll be delighted to know that I've won the first prize in a photography competition and the piece I clicked is going to be displayed in a
photo
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exhibition. I just can't contain my excitement, that's why I am sharing
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wonderful news with you and
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want to invite you to the gallery. As you know
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since I was young, I've been trying my hand at photography. So, I decided to take part in the 2024
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Photography Competition to try my luck. It was a large event attended by fifty people competing against each other and the first prize was an amount of 50,000 rupees
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the chance of the winning
photo
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being promoted at the National
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Gallery. Talking about the
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that I took,
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was a beautiful shot of a female monkey trying to save her youngling from the claws of a Tiger. I took great danger
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clicking
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situation and the
photo
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became a symbol of perseverance and motherly love. The judges were impressed by it and so, I took the prize home. As you are my best buddy, I'd love it if you
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to the exhibition and it'd
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give us a chance to catch up. The exhibition is at the National Gallery on 10 Akbar Road, Delhi and will held on July 20 starting at 10 AM. See you there
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. Yours lovingly, Lovish
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Use paragraphs to clearly distinguish different parts of the letter. This would enhance readability
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Include a bit more detail about the competition itself, like who organized it or whether there were any specific themes participants had to follow.
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Excellent use of a warm, friendly tone throughout the letter. This is appropriate for an informal invitation.
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Provided a compelling description of the photograph, making it easy for the reader to visualize and appreciate it.
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Included all necessary details for the invitation, ensuring the friend has all the information needed to attend.

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