You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe - competition snd prize - About the photograph - Invite your friend

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Dear Anmol, How's it going? It's great to write to you after

such

a long time. You'll be delighted to know that I've won the first prize in a photography competition and the piece I clicked is going to be displayed in a

photo

exhibition. I just can't contain my excitement, that's why I am sharing

this

wonderful news with you and

also

want to invite you to the gallery. As you know

that

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since I was young, I've been trying my hand at photography. So, I decided to take part in the 2024

All India

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Photography Competition to try my luck. It was a large event attended by fifty people competing against each other and the first prize was an amount of 50,000 rupees

along with

the chance of the winning

photo

being promoted at the National

Photo

Gallery. Talking about the

photo

that I took,

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was a beautiful shot of a female monkey trying to save her youngling from the claws of a Tiger. I took great danger

while

clicking

this

situation and the

photo

became a symbol of perseverance and motherly love. The judges were impressed by it and so, I took the prize home. As you are my best buddy, I'd love it if you

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to the exhibition and it'd

also

give us a chance to catch up. The exhibition is at the National Gallery on 10 Akbar Road, Delhi and will held on July 20 starting at 10 AM. See you there

then

. Yours lovingly, Lovish

Submitted by komalverma271999 on Sat Jul 13 2024

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coherence cohesion

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Include a bit more detail about the competition itself, like who organized it or whether there were any specific themes participants had to follow.

coherence cohesion

Excellent use of a warm, friendly tone throughout the letter. This is appropriate for an informal invitation.

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Provided a compelling description of the photograph, making it easy for the reader to visualize and appreciate it.

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Included all necessary details for the invitation, ensuring the friend has all the information needed to attend.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe - competition snd prize - About the photograph - Invite your friend

Fully explain your ideas

some people argue that because the internet make it so easy for children to access facts, schools should not focus on teaching facts. instead they should focus on developing children's skills and potential, and their relationships with other people. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that students should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community Do you agree or disagree?