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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give yours own opinion.

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While the
parents
’ responsibility is to build their
children
 as
a
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good citizen, others believe that
school
 is the place where
children
 learn how to be
a good members
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a good member
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 of
society
. I will discuss both
point
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points
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 of views with my opinion. Generally, some people believe that
parents
is
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are
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 the best teacher of
the
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children
 to learn good
behavior
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behaviour
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. Most of the time
children
 spend
day
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the day
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 with
parents
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their parents
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,
thus
 create a close relationship
to
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 their
parents
.
Therefore
,
children
 may obey their
parents
,
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 and can learn about
good
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 manner and social value or ethics from their home.
For example
, many kids resemble their father as a
super hero
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superhero
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 and they always copy his activities, result in,
they
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them
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 would do
same
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the same
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 things as they observed.
That is
 why, I think,
parents
 could take a vital role to teach their wellspring social norms and ethics.
On the other hand
,
School
 has
also
a
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responsibilities to develop their student with
good
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a good
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 characteristic that help them
be become
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become
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 a good person of
society
.
However
,
school
 staff know several
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strategies
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strategy
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onstrategy
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 how to motivate their students
doing
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 something good which is
blessing
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a blessing
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 for others.
For instance
,
sometime
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school
 organize different voluntary workshops which encourage
children
 involving various social activities making them
a
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good members of
society
. So, it cannot be omitted the role of
school
 to learn good things for
children
. In conclusion,
Parents
 and schools both have individual responsibilities to build
children
 as
a good members
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good members
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 of
society
. So, It is difficult to
thinks
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avoiding
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about avoiding
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ones
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 contribution
in
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to
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children
’s life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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