Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

The digital

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technology

has intruded in every aspect of fields globally. Most of the western countries today has deployed

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technology

excessively in the learning system. Fewer optimists believe

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is a positive development and others oppose

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statement.

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strongly endorse the positivity where it has taken us to

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world.

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essay would analyse both the consequences and give my opinion.

Firstly

to consider, the advanced

technology

in education has introduced distance learning systems. Nowadays ,the introduction to e-learning has given all an opportunity to continue their studies without any distractions.

Moreover

,not all students are capable of continuing their studies after finishing school

hence

,

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distance learning system has given

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chance to continue their

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studies

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further

anytime and anywhere they wish.

Besides

, due to prevailing situations schools were able to continue their learning

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online. To illustrate, in

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Srilanka

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the universities have

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many e-learning

degree

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those

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for those

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who are unable to attend colleges. And

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with the help of apps like zoom and Microsoft teams the schools were able to continue their subjects online without discontinuing due to covid curfew periods.

On the other hand

,

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has lead to many health issues like leading to poor eyesight and lack of intellectual development. The more the pupils access machines the chance of poor eyesight is increased nowadays and especially younger ones the screen exposure has lead

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vision.

Moreover

,the development of cognitive skills doesn’t improve mainly the younger ones.

For example

,nowadays after the online learning classes started in

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Sri Lanka

Srilanka

, has caused an increment in the number of pupils wearing spectacles . To conclude ,

the

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technology

has many consequences in our lives,both

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benefits and drawbacks. In

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I believe the merits overweigh the demerits, by the use of computers in academically

nonetheless

its harm can be avoided by certain measures.