You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: •explain which course you are interested in •say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Theo Dolman, and I am a recent high school graduate from India. I am eager to continue my education at your esteemed university and am writing to inquire about the Early Childhood Education program.
I have researched extensively and found that your institution is among the leading universities in Canada for
this
field. A friend also
informed me that your program emphasizes practical, hands-on learning through placements and internships, which I believe will greatly enhance my academic and professional development.
Could you kindly provide detailed information on the program's availability, tuition fees, and the necessary documents for international student admission? Additionally
, I am interested in learning about the scholarships offered by your university. I believe that my academic achievements, skills, and relevant experiences make me a strong candidate for a scholarship.
Thank you for your time and assistance. I look forward to your response. Please feel free to contact me at [email protected].
Yours sincerely,
Theo DolmanSubmitted by maangaganpreet51 on
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task achievement
Consider expanding more on why you chose the specific course and its relevance to your future goals.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a distinct idea for clearer separation of content.
coherence cohesion
You provided a clear structure by outlining your inquiry and introducing yourself, discussing your interest and what you know about the university, and explaining why you should receive the scholarship in separate sections.
task achievement
Your writing tone is formal and polite, suitable for this type of request.
coherence cohesion
The closing statement is courteous and encourages a response, which is good practice.
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