Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However, some says that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
The
bunch of people believe that free Correct article usage
A
education
at every level is beneficial for everyone while other
have a contrasting viewpoint. Those who oppose state that university Replace the word
others
education
should not be free owning to they become practical and independent so they could pay their fees
. Here, there is strong
argument on both sides Add an article
a strong
hence
, before coming down to my opinion i
will discuss both arguments in Change the capitalization
I
this
further
essay.
On one side, at the time of college studies, scholar get
mature and they can start earning by doing part-time jobs so Change the verb form
gets
this
will help them to earn some money and they will able to bear their expense. The advantages of part-time work during graduations are, they become independent, gain practical knowledge, learn about financial management and many more which are make them confident. Moreover
, government
has so many Add an article
the government
sector
to take care Change to a plural noun
sectors
like
medical, science and technology, research and development, law and etc. Authorities Change preposition
of like
has
to spend million money for the welfare of society, if university degree expense Change the verb form
have
are
spent by Change the verb form
is
student
themselves it will be better for Add an article
the student
the
society. Remove the article
apply
For example
, in the
Correct article usage
apply
Canada
most Add a comma
,Canada
of
Verify preposition usage
apply
grad
Add an article
the grad
students
do small jobs after classes to pay their tuitions fees
.
On the other side, graduation tuition fees
are expensive that every student cannot afford. Even if they do different part-time works, they are not able to bear this
. This
gradually lead
to leave Change the verb form
leads
the
tertiary Correct article usage
apply
education
permanently. The doing
part-time employment during Correct article usage
Doing
study
Add an article
the study
a study
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
create
stress for Change the verb form
creates
students
because of the workload they cannot focus on their study and at some point, they will give more importance on earning money rather than focusing on educations
. Everyone does not get the
equal opportunity for Change the article
an
educations
if this
is not provided free. For instance
, a
recent survey conduct stated that most of the Remove the article
apply
students
in India leave their higher educations
because they and their families could not pay their tuitions fees
. Hence
, it is better to provide free
cost of Add an article
the free
a free
educations
is
beneficial for everyone.
In conclusion, I strongly Correct pronoun usage
that is
favor
free Change the spelling
favour
education
at all level because this
will give equal opportunity to study. Those who oppose this
idea consider that students
are mature during their graduations, they can manage by doing small survival jobs.Submitted by meghpatel2694 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite