1.You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.
Dear Shally
I hope you are sailing in
the
boat of good health. I am writing you Correct article usage
a
this
missive to invite you for a vacation which initially
I planned with my brother. He is unable to join me due to
his last minute
call from his office for the project, he has been working diligently Add a hyphen
last-minute
from
Change preposition
for
past
six months. Correct article usage
the past
Although
, he made sure of completing
it before Change preposition
to complete
this
holiday but could not do so. Thus
, he has canceled
his plans.
Let me give you Change the spelling
cancelled
detail
about our Fix the agreement mistake
details
trip
. We will be leaving from New Delhi on 16th July 2024 and will reach France on 18th July 2024 as there is a long hault
at Correct your spelling
haul
halt
Duabi
airport Correct your spelling
Dubai
and
I was thinking Correct word choice
apply
to attend
the Gold Exhibition which is close to the airportChange preposition
of attending
,
since we both are fond of precious jewels. After reaching France on Remove the comma
apply
18th
, we will have a day to relax before we leave for the Sunburn Festival. The festival is for three days and post that we have a week to explore the city in which we will be visiting many historical buildings. It is Correct article usage
the 18th
10-day
short Add an article
a 10-day
trip
which can be extended to another week as I have booked the air tickets with a flexible plan.
I hope you will join me for the trip
as we have been planning for a trip
from
a long time. If any changes you want to Change preposition
for
do
Verb problem
make
in
the Change preposition
to
itenary
, let me know.
Waiting for Correct your spelling
itinerary
you
reply.
Love
BindiyaChange the pronoun
your
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider breaking down the longer paragraphs into smaller ones focusing on single ideas. This will make it easier for the reader to follow the plan and understand your points clearly.
task achievement
Ensure to proofread for minor grammatical issues. For example, 'hault' should be 'halt'. Additionally, the closing sentence could be more grammatically accurate: 'Waiting for your reply' could be 'Looking forward to your reply.'
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a warm and friendly tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend. The structure with a greeting and closing adds to the effectiveness.
task achievement
The detailed plan for the vacation is well elaborated and provides pertinent information about the trip, making the invitation clear and appealing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,