You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am pleased to inform you that we have chosen your community as the venue for our company’s annual conference. I am responsible for the event’s planning and execution and
hence
writing for some details. I am hoping that you would answer my queries so that I can book it well in advance.
We are planning to host the conference at the end of August and need the venue for the whole evening. Please notify its availability either on 25th and 26th August. We are expecting 85 guests on the occasion and also
need some arrangement
for the conference like stage, tables, chairs and etc. We Fix the agreement mistake
arrangements
also
need a projector and electricity backup so that we can show some presentations to our employees and partners without any interruption. Kindly inform me the
individual costs of your service, venue, food and drinks in the return mails.
Please be noted that the event is profoundly important for us and any sort of flaws will detriment our company’s image as well as your so I hope you will be rigorous in providing your service.
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forward
froward
to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Megh PatelCorrect your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite