You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center.

Dear Sir / Madam, I am pleased to inform you that we have chosen your community as the venue for our company’s annual conference. I am responsible for the event’s planning and execution and
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writing for some details. I am hoping that you would answer my queries so that I can book it well in advance. We are planning to host the conference at the end of August and need the venue for the whole evening. Please notify its availability either on 25th and 26th August. We are expecting 85 guests on the occasion and
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for the conference like stage, tables, chairs and etc. We
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need a projector and electricity backup so that we can show some presentations to our employees and partners without any interruption. Kindly inform me
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individual costs of your service, venue, food and drinks in the return mails. Please be noted that the event is profoundly important for us and any sort of flaws will detriment our company’s image as well as your so I hope you will be rigorous in providing your service. I am looking
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to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Megh Patel
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Community center
  • Office event
  • Organize
  • Facilities
  • Availability
  • Reserve
  • Date
  • Time
  • Duration
  • Number of participants
  • Budget
  • Catering
  • Equipment
  • Setup
  • Decorations
  • Entertainment
  • Parking
  • Assistance
  • Collaboration
  • Appreciate
  • Gratitude
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