Some people think that children should not watch television because it has negative effects, while others believe that televison helps children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
television plays a major role in children life.I agree with both points,it has a bad effect on them and the other side is it useful in man ways.
to begin
with,children watch television all day.it has a negative impact on their health.consider an example of a child watching it from morning to evening,it will cause eyesight. and there are some shows which will misguide them in many ways.many advertisements are misleading the younger generation.take an example of an axe advertisement,in that video when the person uses the spray immediately girls will come to him by smelling the accent of that product.after seeing this
one
so many people from younger ones
to adults started buying this
perfume.as in result
their sales were increased by wasting the money of their beloved customers.
Add a comma
,result
in contrast
to this
,there are many shows like entertainment,education,geographical and more on the list.they play a great role in life ,the first
one
gives relaxation when you are watching their comedy.whenever you feel distressed or stressed just watch one
.when it comes to educational ones
they provide a lot of examples in the real world related to their topic.the last
one
tells about nature importance,how to use them,what happens if we misuse them.there are many shows that are very useful and helpful.
to conclude,it has a vast amount of information which is being displayed every day,it is up to you to choose between them.the right ones
will guide you to good.while the bad ones
have a negative impact on your life.pick wisely.Submitted by manojdivi295 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite