In many countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
In most developed countries, fast
food
is a very popular trend due to its convenience and good taste. There are many advantages here, but in no case should we forget about the disadvantages. There are a lot of amenities, no need to spend a lot of time, satiety and taste, these factors help people
to distribute their day. It is worth noting that today many workers, taxi drivers or office workers cannot spend a lot of time and money on restaurants or cafes, and in this
case, fast food
is an ideal option for such
people
. Also
fast Add a comma
,Also
food
these days is very affordable, fast food
cafes can be found on every corner. In general, you can order fast food
to
yourself using the Internet, thereby not wasting your time and money on travel. Change preposition
for
In addition
, fast food
, due to its demand, is very cheap and creates very good conditions for its customers. On the other hand
, fast food
is considered the main cause of poor human health. Although
fast food
is in high demand, it is not nutritious and hygienic. It can be said that fast food
does not contain such
a necessary substance for health as vitamin, which has a very high fat
content. Add a hyphen
high-fat
Therefore
, this
is the reason why in some countries the number of people
suffering from heart disease, disability, cancer is growing rapidly. In addition
, fast food
is not safe, as there is no guarantee that it is carefully prepared and does not contain toxic substances. Fast food
is always the choice for every meal in every home, people
cook less at home. Therefore
, it also
has a bad effect on part of the cozy
atmosphere in the family. After all, it is very important that Change the spelling
cosy
people
who have abused fast food
and know how to balance their lives with the help of a decent diet. The above reasons give me sufficient reason to believe that the disadvantages of fast food
outweigh its advantages,
because there is nothing more important than Remove the comma
apply
people
's health.Submitted by badilkha on
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