Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information on the Internet and study at home. Agree or Disagree?

In modern society, it is argued that

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formal education and school attendance is unnecessary by the reason that the

internet

has a variety of different subjects and

children

are able to study it from home. I totally disagree with

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opinion because the

internet

cannot provide interaction with a

teacher

as well as the

internet

is highly addictive and destructive. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will explain my viewpoint with relevant examples.

To begin

with, even

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the

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is a great

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for finding information. It does not completely satisfy the purpose

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education, which is providing a solid knowledge of

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subject

for

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generation.

However

, the goals can be achieved by communication with

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and active inclusion of a pupil in the educational classes.

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is because the

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tools and

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storage of information, while a

teacher

is literary a guide through the essence of knowledge. On top of that, a

teacher

is helping the youth to understand a

subject

, encouraging them to study it in

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depths which is the

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education channels.

For example

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how to calculate their maths and make it correctly. They can be understood the answer by asking their teachers.

In addition

, there are plenty of distractions on the

internet

such

as entertainment sites with games, different forums

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videos.

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kind of resources are may cause

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internet

addiction, when a person simply spends hours and hours in front of the screen without

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reason.

Thus

, the child was learning

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online, he may be easy distracted by mess media as well as becomes an

internet

addict.

For instance

, today due to the pandemic most

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school

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children

throughout the world are studying online and their parents noticed that it was hard to

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as their

children

tend to

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games online

instead

of studying and cannot

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subject

. In conclusion, I completely disagree that the school lost their potential with the appearance of the

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because

children

needed

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supervision from a professional, who can help them to gain fundamental.