Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As the world is developing day by day with that the mean of transportation is growing, to cope up with the increasing population the
government
is investing more money in the development of transportation mainly in the
railways
than the roads. In my view, I do agree with the investment which our institutions
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doing in the
railways
as it will help in reducing the
air
pollution
also
.
Railways
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the
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always one of the most important way of transport from
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old age.
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we know from decade trains are used for the delivery of the good for
long distance
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as it
save
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time and can supply good in bulk.
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: cargo trains are used which can supply trillions of ton stuff with the safety from one country to another
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no time,
other
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use
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of the
train
is for
traveling
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purpose.
World
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is growing in every field of transportation and to cope with the increasing population and to decrease the load of
air
pollution
government
is funding more money in the advancement of the
train
and making more projects for construction new route for
train
travel.
For example
in my country India the current ruling party is putting more interest in the
railways
like making metro,
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, etc. So that we can put
a
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control on
air
pollution
and it
help
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pupil
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to travel fast in less time to cover
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distance.
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, In my
view
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i
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totally agree with
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government
spending more money
in
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the
railways
because in a way it is helping in
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of ways like to transport different products, for passengers
traveling
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, to decrease
air
pollution
, etc. overall, In
conclusion
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train
is
good
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way of transport and
government
is doing
lot
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a lot
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of things in
development
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the development
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of the
train
, like funding.
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