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You are organizing a conference for your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking him/her to give a presentation during the conference. -Describe what this conference is about -Why you want him/her to give a presentation -Give details about the conference

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Dear Mr. Anderson, I am reaching out to extend an invitation for you to present at our upcoming annual
conference
. Allow me to provide some insight into the event's purpose and agenda.
This
 will mark the inaugural annual
conference
 organized by our branch, with attendance expected from our owner and all members of the Board of Directors. At
this
conference
, we aim to present the annual performance reports of all branches and discuss the annual balance sheet. I believe you are the ideal candidate to lead the presentation on branch performance. Your strong communication skills and ability to elucidate complex Excel pie charts and bar graphs make you invaluable for
this
 role.
Additionally
, your assistance in organizing the data in a coherent manner would be greatly appreciated. The
conference
 will take place at the Starcast Hotel, which offers ample facilities including a large screen, quality sound system, and comfortable seating arrangements.
Furthermore
, we have secured accommodation for you starting from the 13th of
this
 month, one day before the
conference
. Should you require any specific equipment or assistance, please feel free to contact us at 924648132. I sincerely hope you will accept our invitation to present on
this
 significant day for our branch. Best regards, Jacob Brown.
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Enhancement Suggestion
Consider giving a bit more detail on the specific subject of the presentation to further personalize and specify the request.
Enhancement Suggestion
Use varied sentence structures to make the writing even more engaging.
Tone and Clarity
Excellent use of professional tone and clear request for the presentation.
Structure
Well-structured paragraphs, making the letter easy to follow.
Greeting and Closing
Effective greeting and closing that suit the professional context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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