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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need to print books, magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The way of gaining
information
 has been altered by cutting-edge technology
such
 as computers and electrical devices in
this
 era. Nowadays, whether paper-based
information
 materials should no longer be published is an arguable question. In
this
 essay, I will clearly illustrate that there are not more than enough reasons to stop printing publications, and prefer to disagree with
this
 suggestion. On the one hand, nowadays, we can have access to the Internet for gaining
information
 whenever and wherever possible. It is a big reason why many people would choose a new method to read, learn and search for
information
 online, rather than hold the traditional way to access messages.
For example
, smartphone navigational applications are practical and accurate for drivers, which result in a driver no longer pulling over to check a printed map.
On the other hand
, It is undoubted that the utilization of paper-based printings is not a productive method in modern time.
However
, the publication can help some part of population groups continue to access all kinds of messages, especially senior citizens.
For example
, the essential reason is that new skills in using computers and electrical devices are not easy to learn for older citizens. They need physical publications in their daily lives to get
information
,
such
 as browsing current affairs, checking advertisements for buying vehicles, learning new skills. In conclusion, the publication
also
 plays an important role in gaining
information
, especially for older people. I strongly disagree to terminate press
such
 as books, magazines and newspapers.
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