You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time Write a letter to your boss in your letter Explain why you want to reduce your working hours Say which hours you would like to work Describe how your part time studies would benefit your employer

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Dear Sir, I am Adebisi Damilola a senior nursing officer working in the surgical unit of your prestigious hospital. I am writing

this

letter to request a reduction in the time I spend at work because I recently got admitted into YK University to study a

part-timetime

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part-time time

part-time-time

course. I would like my working hours to be reduced from 50 hours a week to 40 hours per week because I would need time to attend my weekend

lecturers

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Additionally

, I would like to study and do all my assignments during

this

time off work. I would prefer to work on Mondays to Fridays but I would need to close by 2pm on Fridays because I have Friday evening classes. I would still want to continue running shifts during the week as I normally do before . I will be doing a master's program in infection control and I believe

this

would be beneficial to the hospital considering the high rate of infectious diseases that have been recorded in the past year. The knowledge I acquire will be implemented in all our wards and I would do

this

by carrying out seminars and simulations for all nurses in the organization after my program. Thank you in advance for granting my request and for your usual support. Yours Faithfully, Adebisi Oluwadamilola.

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Task Achievement

Consider elaborating slightly more on how reducing work hours will directly benefit your studies, and in turn, how this benefits the employer.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph covers one main point. While your paragraphs do this well, ensure clarity and avoid cramming too much different information into one section.

Task Achievement

You clearly outline your request to reduce work hours and provide valid reasoning for it.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing of your letter are well-structured and appropriate for a formal letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

217 words

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