After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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Dear John, You were so kind to look after me after

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a terrible accident a few weeks ago.

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writing to you to express my appreciation

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your kindness and braveness.

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Kate Smith, a mother of two wonderful children.

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morning I went to the school with my daughters and across Morgan Street and Green Street I was

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hit

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by a car. I was faint and you picked me up at the nearest hospital on Rose Street and were with me during

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a long waiting for doctors. If you have not helped me, I would have known what was with me.

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so glad that I’ve met

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a kind-hearted person on my way.

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so thankful to you for what I can’t say. Please accept my invitation for a dinner at any convenient time for you. I would really appreciate it if you could visit me with your family. Looking forward

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answer, Kate Smith

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
appreciation
subtly
kindness
assisted
heartfelt
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sacrifices
safety
comfort
invitation
eager
personal connection
reflecting
impact
reinforcing
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