Many people think that the government should spend money to explore life in the outer space, while others think that this is a waste of public money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (10th Jan) (AC)*

Ever since,

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human landed on the moon, other living lands in

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and

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of

existence

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of life on them has fascinated the whole human race. Along with the gradual fall in

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of habitable land on

earth

, most

of

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the

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individuals say we should spend our treasures on expeditions to other planets in search of living organisms,

however

, some believe that it is just a waste of public

resources

. In forthcoming

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this

essay will explain both views, coupled with

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an explanation

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to my personal opinion that why

,

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I agree with

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opinion. On one hand, we cannot overlook the fact that

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kind of researches are helpful for us as we are already living in so much polluted ecosystem. Our food, air and water quality have deteriorated drastically over

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decade. In order to keep the cycle of life going on, we need alternatives to

earth

. Various discoveries done by different

space

agencies have shown us how some other planets are superior to

earth

in natural

resources

. So in order to provide a non-contaminated atmosphere to our

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forthcoming

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we ought to have

these kind

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of

space

programmes to come up with alternatives.

On the other hand

, till now thousands of crores has been put into various

space

journeys still we only have our hands filled with sand. We may have found some signs of life but

overthere

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over there

climatic conditions are so harsh that even statues can not breathe. If compared in monetary terms no favourable gains

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been done,

furthermore

, we have just wasted

resources

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could have been helpful in improving the situation at our current residing place. In conclusion, I would just like to reiterate that people have contrasting views,

although

some percentage of

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the crowd

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still support the huge investments in discovering

universe

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, some still are in opposition to

this

. In my eyes

also

,

instead

of putting the fortunes in fuel tanks of massive rockets, our governments should utilize those

resources

for

betterment

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of our mother nature on

earth

.