In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, due to the drastically increased number of population and environmental issues, it is becoming hard to live on the
earth
. Many
people
say that the scientist should spend more time and wealth on researching the possibility of
life
on other planets
such
as Mars or the moon. In my opinion,
this
is not exactly a solution. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, the
earth
is the best place for humans and animals to live
life
because it contains the proper atmosphere and it
also
has an adequate number of
resources
which fulfilling human’s routine needs.
Moreover
,
life
on the
earth
is getting difficult owing to some critical reasons like the destruction of the forest, industrial waste
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in water, air pollutions, lack of natural
resources
like minerals, fuels, gasoline will make it difficult for
people
to live.
However
, all these problems can be resolved, if the
government
should spend capital in solving
this
issue by awarding
people
or developing eco-friendly systems for our daily needs which will make easier human
life
on the
earth
instead
of searching for new planets.
For example
, the spread of coronavirus on the
earth
leads to thousand of death worldwide, all countries should spend money on finding vaccination and save
people
’s lives.
On the other hand
, our
government
have already spent lots of fund on spacecraft and space mission on researching of the new planet like mars, but,
still
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our scientists are not finding any clauses where
people
can survive on the Mars or moon.
Furthermore
,
earth
has an appropriate range of gases and
resources
but it needs to balanced and reformed, whereas, to find all these natural and minerals on mars will demand more wealth in future.
Thus
, the
government
should allocate a budget for maintaining and controlling our climate by introducing strict laws and regulation for those who destruct our ecosystems. To sum up, there is no doubt that in future,
life
will be extremely difficult on the
earth
but we can save our planet if individuals and
government
should take proper action to save climate conditions and natural
resources
.
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