Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same product anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The
world
become
constricted to a small global village.Unlike in the past,in Change the verb form
becomes
this
modern world
each and every product is available anywhere in the universe,because of the development of technology.In my point of Add a comma
,world
view
I feel there are many advantages and disadvantages can be notable in it.Add a comma
,view
This
essay will discuss the
both views of Remove the article
apply
availability
of Correct article usage
the availability
products
in
all over the Change preposition
apply
world
.
The main positive attributes are,firstly
,people
can easily access whatever they need to eat or drink anywhere in the world
.Because many people
are living in foriegn
countries and the foreigners are visiting other countries as well,so the visitors would not feel that they are out of their country.Correct your spelling
foreign
For instance
,ten years back kiwi fruit was very uncommon in our fruit stalls,kiwi is a national fruit of new zeland.However
at present in all the fruitstall
it has a special stand.Correct your spelling
fruit stall
fruits till
Moreover
,people
would never face any culture shock any
place in the universe.Not only eatables are available all over but Change preposition
in any
also
all kind products
,including Change preposition
of products
make up
and cosmetic materials are abundantly available everywhere.Join the words
makeup
Furthermore
,it will boost up the economy of the nation.
Although
there are many advantages,the negative points are also
should take it seriously.Enviornmental
pollution is one of the adverse Correct your spelling
Environmental
effect
of transporting goods from one place to another.Change to a plural noun
effects
For example
,the products
are transferring via flght
to deliver it fast to the destination.Correct your spelling
flight
This
process will damage our ecosystem by the excess emission of carbon dioxide to
our atmosphere.Gradually our Change preposition
into
enviornment
would get highly polluted Correct your spelling
environment
then
both human as well as, all the living species in the world
get disease
.To protect the ecosystem the number of cargo flights should be reduced.
To conclude,developments are crucial for the countries,Add an article
the disease
a disease
therefore
the products
should be shipped instead
of flying through the air.The government authorities should be aware of the future adverse effects may
happen to our ecosystem.The Correct pronoun usage
that may
people
should keep the atmosphere clean and tidy for the upcoming generation.Submitted by margushobi on
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