Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same product anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The
world
become
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constricted to a small global village.Unlike in the past,in
this
modern
world
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each and every product is available anywhere in the universe,because of the development of technology.In my point of
view
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I feel there are many advantages and disadvantages can be notable in it.
This
essay will discuss
the
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both views of
availability
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the availability
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of
products
in
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all over the
world
. The main positive attributes are,
firstly
,
people
can easily access whatever they need to eat or drink anywhere in the
world
.Because many
people
are living in
foriegn
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foreign
countries and the foreigners are visiting other countries as well,so the visitors would not feel that they are out of their country.
For instance
,ten years back kiwi fruit was very uncommon in our fruit stalls,kiwi is a national fruit of new zeland.
However
at present in all the
fruitstall
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fruit stall
fruits till
it has a special stand.
Moreover
,
people
would never face any culture shock
any
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place in the universe.Not only eatables are available all over but
also
all kind
products
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,including
make up
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and cosmetic materials are abundantly available everywhere.
Furthermore
,it will boost up the economy of the nation.
Although
there are many advantages,the negative points are
also
should take it seriously.
Enviornmental
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Environmental
pollution is one of the adverse
effect
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of transporting goods from one place to another.
For example
,the
products
are transferring via
flght
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flight
to deliver it fast to the destination.
This
process will damage our ecosystem by the excess emission of carbon dioxide
to
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our atmosphere.Gradually our
enviornment
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environment
would get highly polluted
then
both human as well as, all the living species in the
world
get
disease
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.To protect the ecosystem the number of cargo flights should be reduced. To conclude,developments are crucial for the countries,
therefore
the
products
should be shipped
instead
of flying through the air.The government authorities should be aware of the future adverse effects
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happen to our ecosystem.The
people
should keep the atmosphere clean and tidy for the upcoming generation.
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