Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Few
people
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argue that the
government
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should spending on various welfare activities like the development of education, technology, and employment
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of spending on
artists
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while few
people
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argue that, art is an important part of society and plays a key role in everyone's life, and the
government
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should encourage the
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responsible for
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arts. In my opinion, it is not necessary for the
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to invest in
artists
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when communities are suffering from a lack of several other basic facilities. On the one hand, some humans trust that
artists
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are highly skilled and help
people
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to relive their day to day stress, with their skills like music, drama, and painting. The current of generation
people
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are busy with their regular workload and hardly find time to relax. These
artists
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help
people
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to divert their mind from their routine work stress with their special skills.
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, the sad part is, most
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have no standard income due to which they leave their profession and look for other jobs, if
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trend continues
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,
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we don't see any
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help society with their talent.
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, in countries like Pakistan and Afghanistan, the
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gave the least priority to their
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which resulted in the mass migration of the artisan and few changed their profession due to lack of opportunities, and now the country is suffering from most of the
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suffering from depression, and loss of motivation.
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, some believe that several
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are struggling due to a lack of basic discipline, and it is not really important for the power to spend money on
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. Actually, the authority should invest in science, which will empower
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company to build a better quality of life by creating job opportunities.
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, the world is in high need of technology development due to the rapid growth of the population. It is required to increase the supply to meet the demand of the crowd and investments in technologies help to innovate the ways to increase the productivity of various sectors like food and manufacturing.
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, countries like China, the USA and India are spending more on technology to balance their demand and supply, and
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on exports to gain profits from global markets. In conclusion, certain demographics of society believe that the
government
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should spend on
artists
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and others believe that the spends should be on studies, modern technologies and jobs. I believe that the spends of the
government
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should be on development activities like improving the quality of education, innovations and employment rather than investing in
artists
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • government patronage
  • cultural heritage
  • national identity
  • creative industries
  • unnecessary expense
  • essential services
  • democratize
  • private patronage
  • market forces
  • innovation
  • boost tourism
  • subjective nature
  • allocated ineffectively
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