Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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It is always a good gesture to land someone a helping hand. If we are capable of achieving our desired goals,
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we should help others in achieving theirs'. A true leader is one how will grow and supports others as well. Having said
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, I opine with the thought, that developed
countries
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should support
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or developing
countries
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with different types of aids.
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with, let us consider a nation, which is struggling to overcome the poverty issue. In
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case
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the government is dealing with the situation where they would be finding it difficult to provide basic necessities
such
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as food, water, medicines, shelter, education etc. All these necessities can be taken care of if the patron of the family is able to earn; which in turn requires a job. When generating job opportunities is quite a big deal for the developed-nations, we can clearly understand the situation of an under-developed nation. If the powerful
conuntries
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countries
would help needy
countries
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with
exteremly
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extremely
basic requirements for surviving like food and education, it will provide them
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strength
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to fight against the other odds.
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, the United Nations provide help to many needy nations with
aforementioned
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basic needs.
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, the governing authorities should definitely take care
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the security and safety of their citizens. The authorities are
responsibile
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responsible
for the wellbeing of the citizens. They cannot completely depend on
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help from the ally. They should create
oppotunities
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opportunities
for jobs and provide employment to country people. It is their prime duty to become self-reliant and grow.
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,
administration
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the administration
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should use natural and renewable resources. They should understand their
strenghts
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strengths
and work
upon
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it
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them
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. To conclude, ally-country should help needy
countries
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basic
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necessity to overcome other difficulties and thereby help them in becoming self-sufficient.
However
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, the
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contries
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countries
should understand their
responsibities
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responsibilities
and work hard to grow and take
utmost
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advantage of the help received by other powerful-nations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interconnected
  • global stability
  • economic self-sufficiency
  • sustainable development
  • capacity-building
  • foreign aid
  • mutual benefits
  • trade relations
  • long-term outcomes
  • dependency
  • moral obligation
  • alleviate poverty
  • humanitarian assistance
  • resource allocation
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