Many peoples are copying celebrity from magazines and on TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a good idea to copy celebrities.
In the world today, the majority of the young generation follows
celebrities
from magazines and on TV. Common people
who are fans of popular celebrity try to copy them when they watch these famous persons and read articles about them. The desire to live a glamorous and luxury life like them. However
, I tend to believe that copying famous personalities is a bad tendency. Now I would like to explore my viewpoints on this
statement before forming a conclusion.
To embark on, there is the various reason for this
craze among people
to follow celebrities
. Due to social media , youngster aware of their celebrities
. people
often think of celebrities
as their ideal and they try to copy their style and footsteps to achieve success. Some people
put themself under pressure to look as beautiful as celebrities
. for example
, adolescents are attracted towards the fashion sense of media starts which they believe that he or she looks like one of their favourite celebrities
. They spent a large of their income to buy things.
Moreover
, one reason is that people
who call themselves a fan of a favourite celebrity and they have a desire to be famous in society. People
imitate actor or actress to look more stylish and classy. By doing this
, they try to gain the attraction of the society even though it might not match their personality either or they are not comfortable with it. for example
, women who wear high heels in their office by mimicking a TV actress would find it very hard to work a whole day on heels.
By the way of conclusion, it is true that the majority of people
try to imitate their favourite TV actor or actress, which is not right. They should try to follow only good things from others such
as principles and values.Submitted by naresh on
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