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Topic: Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Verbal
communication
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 is
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 effective
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 than non-verbal
communication
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 like written connection.I completely agree that
people
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 who are connecting verbally have better connections than others
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a quick understandings
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quick understandings
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and the role of the body of language in better conversation .
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, I shall put forth my supported arguments in the following paragraphs.
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, communicating using a spoken
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 like taking a call or having a face-to-face meeting has high benefits
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 a clear and quick understanding among
people
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 who are talking.
In other words
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, verbal
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 allows better information delivery through encoding and decoding with an opportunity to break any disturbances instantaneously that may affect the conversation between two individuals.
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, when someone has a conversation with another human through a call, they will ask if there are any misunderstandings which will allow
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 end the call with perfect results quickly.
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,
people
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 who are using the written
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,
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 as emails can spend a lot of time without replying to the email for receiving it . Another reason considered to the power of spoken
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 is because of the role of the body language. For more
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, verbal conversations ,especially face-to-face meetings, can allow humans to understand each other perfectly by showing body language ,
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 as facial expressions.
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, when there is a meeting in a firm, the attendees can show their approval or rejection through their happy or sad emotions which can reflect a negative or a positive
overall
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 situation. In conclusion, contacting
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 verbally is better than a written
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method
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 which can provide different positive or negative figures about
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's expressions and break misunderstandings faster than a written
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear main idea and is expanded upon with specific examples and explanations to enhance the argument.
coherence cohesion
There's a good attempt at an introduction and conclusion; however, make sure they are balanced and the conclusion does not introduce new ideas but summarizes the arguments.
task achievement
Develop ideas fully by providing more detailed examples and explanations to meet the task requirements. Consider contrasting ideas to show a broader perspective on the topic.
coherence cohesion
The essay shows a consistent use of clear and logical sequencing of sentences and paragraphs. However, transitions could be smoother to better connect ideas throughout the essay.
task achievement
For a higher score, ensure the main points are fully supported with specific examples. Also, clarity could be improved by avoiding overly complex sentences.
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