Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable, others, however, think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
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feel
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unnecessarily. Personaly
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both arguments have some valid Correct your spelling
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points
Therefore
I do not completly
agree or disagree with both statements.
Watching Correct your spelling
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TV
is usefull
in many ways for humans. From the invention of Correct your spelling
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people
world wide
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TV
everyday
. It helps them to relax enjoy and learn. Replace the word
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TV
as a family together in the evening. It is their family time
to share the common intersest
. It helps them to learn new things and discuss their thoughts. By watching Correct your spelling
interest
TV
regularly; news and programmes many people
learn about current world affairs, politics and other interesting happenings around them. Many youngsters find the
way to relieve their Correct article usage
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TV
only when their alone and away from home.
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on
TV
. Addiction to TV
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programmes
programs
shows
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time
mismanagment
. Some Correct your spelling
mismanagement
people
waste their productive and precious time
infront
of screens for nothing. Correct your spelling
in front
finally
, It leads to a sedentary life style
and Correct your spelling
lifestyle
evantualy
makes them lazy and less active. Wasting too much Correct your spelling
eventually
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people
sick and obese. Reason survey found that people
who are watching TV
more
than 4hours per day found to be more obese and less productive than their counterpart of Change preposition
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same
age and sex. So it is obvious that Correct article usage
the same
people
should not addict to TV
and limiting the
screen Correct article usage
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time
is essential.
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is greatly Correct your spelling
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benificial
if it is limited to a Correct your spelling
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time
frame and usefull
programs, only by Correct your spelling
useful
this
people
can find joy and happiness. Otherwise
, it leads to screen addiction and ultimtely
ended up severe health consequences and Correct your spelling
ultimately
time wasting
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time-wasting
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