Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers. Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an e-mail to the newspaper. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: Suggest a topic that you think would be popular. Say why it would be of interest Explain why it is more relevant/interesting than other topics
Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to congratulate you for completing your 10 years of success. I read the ‘Daily News’ newspaper almost every day for the
last
5 consistent years. I really find various types of useful business-related stuff along with
the news from every corner of the world.
After going through the email from your company, I came to know that you are planning to add another weekly feature to your newspaper. In my opinion, adding ‘live a healthy life’ could be of utmost benefit. There have been so many television programmes introduced for a healthy life in just a few decades. Thus
, it would be a good choice.
The reason behind this
suggestion is that all humans have a very hectic schedule nowadays, thus
going to the gym is a quite daunting task for most of the bodies. As a result
, they are dealing with the issues of depression and anxiety. That in future leads to major health ailments like high blood pressure and heart attacks. Adding a column on making them aware of important healthy and easy living style methods will be an interesting topic.
Most of the folks are overburdened therefore
, they are not able to give equal importance to their bodies. I think this
topic is going to be more eye-catching because a healthy lifestyle is the key to a happy life.
I hope that you will find my suggestion useful.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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single idea per paragraph
To achieve a higher band score, ensure each paragraph clearly centers around a single idea. For example, split the explanation of the topic's relevance into smaller, more focused paragraphs.
logical structure
To improve logical structure, make sure each paragraph flows smoothly to the next. Consider using transitional phrases to guide the reader seamlessly from one point to another.
suitable writing tone
The letter uses a suitable tone, which is polite and appropriate for the context.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are correctly used, aligning well with a formal letter structure.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite