Some people believe that it is valuable for society to experiment with bacteria and viruses while others feel this is dangerous and should not be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People
believe that the experiment
with bacteria
and viruses
is useful for society while others think that it is dangerous and should be avoided. It is indisputable that the
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bacteria
and viruses
are the cause of diseases and sickness in our body and other animals. It is obvious that study and do
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does
experiment
of pathogens
is the
great risk to take and many Correct article usage
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people
think that we should not be done. However
, there are plenty advantages
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of advantages
from
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to
this
experiment
.
Generally, the pathogens
such
as bacteria
and viruses
are the small organisms that live their life as a parasite and this
is the common name for people
to know that bacteria
and viruses
can cause many diseases that harm to human life. For example
, flu is the
common disease caused by Correct article usage
a
viruses
or diarrhea
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diarrhoea
that
caused by Correct pronoun usage
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bacteria
unsanitized food. It is a tendency to believe that the pathogens
are extremely dangerous and people
should not interfere with
.
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themwith
However
, there are
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vast
benefit of study in Add an article
a vast
the vast
bacteria
and viruses
. In particularly
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particular
experiment
of pathogens
brings the
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knowledges
about the treatments of diseases Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
that
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For instance
, the flu vaccination is made by the RNA of those viruses
and tricked our antibody to work on it. If there is no experiment
about the pathogens
, there is no vaccination. Therefore
, it is very important to understand the life cycle and get to know them so we can develop the knowledge of treatment and protection.
In conclusion, there are benefits and drawbacks of
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to
this
experiment
. I believed that the great advance treatment in healthcare systems such
as medications is based on the knowledge and history of pathogens
. To solve the problems, you need to find the cause of it
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