Some people think that money must be spent on promoting the use of bicycles in cities while others think cities must spend on public transport discuss both views and give your opinion

It is true that some people prefer the development of

bicycle

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tracts within the

city

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for the movement but some others prefer the improvement of public

transport

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. I believe

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modes of

transports

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are having

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their own pros and cons.

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money should appropriately

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on

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methods to get an effective transportation network. Promoting cycling within the

city

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is a well-proven alternative not only to ease traffic congestion but

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to promote the 'go green' environmental concerns. Nowadays, modern metropolises are

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up with cycling paths adjoining the main roads.

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trees are planted along the bike tracts to provide

shades

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for the riders. Riding a bike to and for work

reduce

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dependency on other

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modes

such

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as bus, car or motorbike.

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, it will reduce the demand for fuel-consuming vehicles on the roads,

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as

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results

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carbon footprint, global warming and air pollution

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be reduced to a great extent. France and Belgium are famous for their

city

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bicycle

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riding paths. By investing in

bicycle

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tracts those countries have successfully reduced the number of

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apply

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vehicle

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vehicles

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in the major

municipality

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.

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, it is impossible to go everywhere by

bicycle

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. We need a good public

transport

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system to reach

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far away and difficult places,

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when there are good and efficient public

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system people would not use their own or private vehicles. It is proven in many surveys that private wheels are the main cause of traffic congestion in main cities. For example, forty people can be accommodated on a bus without any problem,

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for forty cars we need more space. Investing in public

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is

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really

valued

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development. Most of the developed countries successfully used

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strategy to ease traffic congestion in major

town

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towns

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. In conclusion, investing in

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; bicycles and public

transport

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are good alternatives to improve transportation within the

city

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limits

both

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methods should be combined in an appropriate way to get the maximum benefits.