Some people think that money must be spent on promoting the use of bicycles in cities while others think cities must spend on public transport discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people prefer the development of bicycle tracts within the city for the movement, but some others prefer the improvement of public

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. I believe

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modes of

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their own pros and cons.

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, money should appropriately

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on

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methods to get an effective transportation network. Promoting cycling within the city is a well-proven alternative not only to ease traffic congestion but

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to promote the ‘go green’ environmental concerns. Nowadays, modern metropolises are

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up with cycling paths adjoining the major roads.

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trees are planted along the bike tracts to provide

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for the riders. Riding a bike to and for work

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dependency on other

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modes

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as bus, car or motorbike.

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, it will reduce the demand for fuel-consuming vehicles on the roads, as the results of carbon footprint, global warming and air pollution would be reduced to a great extent. France and Belgium are famous for their city bicycle riding paths. By investing in bicycle tracts, those countries have successfully reduced the number of

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vehicle

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in the major municipality. It is impossible to go everywhere by bike. We need a good public

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system to reach the far away and difficult places,

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when there are efficient public

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system people would not use their own or private vehicles. It is proven in many surveys that private wheels are the primary cause of traffic congestion in major cities.

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, forty people can be accommodated on a bus with no problem,

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for forty cars we need more space. Investing in public

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valued

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development. Most of the developed countries successfully used

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strategy to ease traffic congestion in

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major

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. In conclusion, investing in

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; bicycles and public

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are suitable alternatives to improve transportation within the

city-limits

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city limits

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both

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methods should be combined appropriately to get the maximum benefits.