Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

day and age,

people

are focusing on meeting their material needs.

This

has led manufacturing companies to produce more consumer goods to meet their demand. The drawbacks of

this

trend outweigh the benefits which

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essay is going to elaborate

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.

First

and foremost, in the modern

era

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individuals are acquiring a lot of possessions as a way of showing their status.

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, everyone

want

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to decorate their house with

latest

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furniture and have different gadgets.

This

has resulted in very beautiful homes and

also

it has made

people

to

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work very hard so as to meet their goals.

Therefore

it is positive and does not benefit individuals alone but nations.

However

,

such

has resulted in low production of capital goods as every company try to work on things that are

on

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high demand.

For instance

, manufacturing industries

by pass

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the need for machinery and

and

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therefore

resulting in them becoming very expensive .

Furthermore

,as everyone is basing on producing immediate products a lot of counterfeit are seen in the market.

People

will buy them without realising that and

this

will be a loss .

Consequently

, high demand for certain commodities limits

making

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of other important things ,in

this

case

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machinery,

also

resulting in a number of dishonest on the market. To conclude,

although

consumer goods have become so essential I believe the cons outweigh the pros.

People

has

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put a lot of pressure on producers as they are working to their demands .

Such

has

rcaused

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caused

in an imbalance in production industries.