SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE MAIN ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEM OF OUR TIME IS THE LOSS OF PARTICULAR SPECIES OF PLANTS AND ANIMALS. OTHERS SAY THAT THERE ARE MORE IMPORTANT ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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IN MODERN TIMES, THE ISSUE OF
NATURE
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RUB HAS BECOME HIGHLY CONTROVERSIAL. THERE ARE THOSE WHO SAY THAT SOME HUMAN BEING CONSIDER DECREASING OF PLANTS AND ANIMALS
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OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THERE COULD BE
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BIG ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS. IN
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ESSAY I WILL EXAMINE BOTH SIDE OF THE ARGUMENT AND PROVIDE MY OVERALL OPINION. GENERALLY SPEAKING, THERE IS A WIDE RANGE OF REASONS WHY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT MASTER PROBLEM OF
NATURE
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IS THE COUNT OF DECREASING PLANTS AND ANIMALS. PERHAPS THE MAIN REASON WHY PEOPLE ARE IN FAVOUR OF
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IDEA IS BECAUSE HUNTER SHOULD BE MADE OVER HUNTING, ESPECIALLY FISHING AND PINK. A GOOD ILLUSTRATION OF
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THAT MANY ANIMAL SPECIES HAVE EVANESCED IN MILLENNIUM AGE. A
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POINT IN FAVOUR OF MASTER PROBLEM OF
NATURE
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IS THAT BIG FOREST
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AS AMAZON AND NIL ARE CUT BY VILLAGER FOR REQUIREMENTS. IF
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SITUATION CONTINUE SO, WOLRD WE LIVE WILL DISAPPEAR. DESPİTE THESE ARGUMENTS, THERE IS
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A CASE FOR THE IDEA THAT THER ARE
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MAJOR ENVIRONMENTAL RUBS. THE MAIN REASON WHY PEOPLE THINK THAT
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IS QUITE BAD CASE IS THAT THERE IS MORE AND MORE CAR THAN BEFORE.
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, THESE CAUSE TO AIR DIRY AFFECTING
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.
SECONDLY
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, FACTORY BUILDING IN MODERN AGE FOR PRODUCING LEAD TO GREENHOUSE.
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IS BECAUSE COAL IS USED IN THESE PLANTS FOR ENERGY. IN CONCLUSION,
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IS A TOPIC WHICH IS VERY RELEVANT TO MODERN SOCIETY. DESPITE ARGUMENTS TO THE CONTRARY, I FEEL THAT
NATURE
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HAVE MORE PROBLEMS,
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AS GREENHOUSE, DECREASING ANIMAL AND PLANT COUNTS AND THE DIRTY OF AIR.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
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  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
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